Example 1: High school valedictorian, inspiring, about 4 to 5 minutes
700 words · about 5 min spoken
Good evening, faculty and staff, families, friends, and my fellow graduates of the Class of 2027.
My name is Priya, and I want to start with a confession. I am very nervous. So if my voice shakes, just pretend it's the soup can pyramid. It will wobble a little, and then it will probably fall over.
Every spring, our class built a giant pyramid of soup cans in the lobby for the canned food drive. Every spring, we won. And every spring, that pyramid came crashing down. We never did figure out the engineering. But we kept stacking.
Think about what we've stacked up together. We started freshman year with half our classes online. Many of us didn't really meet until sophomore year. Then the robotics team's robot caught fire at regionals, and now the whole school calls it "the toaster." Junior year, a flood closed the east wing. We had chemistry in the library and gym class in the parking lot. And this winter, the power went out during the concert. The choir finished the song in the dark, and all of us held up our phone flashlights.
That last one stays with me. Nobody planned it. Somebody held up a light, and then somebody else did, and soon the whole room was glowing.
That's what I want to talk about tonight. Asking for help is not the same as failing.
Here's my story. My first chemistry test freshman year, I got a 52. I hid it from my parents for a week. I had a whole plan to quit honors science and never think about it again. Then Mr. Okonkwo found me after class. He didn't give me a speech. He just said, "Come Thursday."
So I went. And I kept going every Thursday night for three years. I'm only standing up here because I finally raised my hand.
Here's what I've noticed. The people who did best here were not the ones who never struggled. They were the ones who asked sooner. Asking is not a weakness. It's a skill, and it might be the most useful one we learned in this building.
Our school motto is "Lift as you climb." I think that's the other half of the lesson. Someone lifts you, and then you turn around and lift someone else. We lost Danny Reyes junior year. His family asked us to remember him as the kid who always held the door. I can't think of a better way to lift someone than that.
Now, some thank-yous, because none of us climbed alone.
Mr. Okonkwo, thank you for three years of Thursday nights. You gave up your evenings for kids who weren't even yours. Ms. Linh, thank you for knowing everyone's schedule better than we did. To the bus drivers, the custodians, and the cafeteria staff, thank you for showing up early and working hard so that our days could run. We saw you, even when we forgot to say so.
And to our parents and grandparents, who worked extra shifts so we could be sitting in these chairs today, thank you. We know what it cost. We won't forget it.
Classmates, look at where we're headed. About half of us are going to four-year colleges. Others are going to community college, nursing programs, and electrician apprenticeships. Some of us are joining the Army and the Air Force. Some are heading straight into jobs. Every one of those paths takes courage, and every one of them will get hard.
When it does, here's what I hope for you. I hope you raise your hand early. I hope you find your Mr. Okonkwo wherever you land. I hope you hold the door for the next person, the way Danny did. And I hope you remember that you're the kind of class that finishes the song in the dark.
So when the lights go out, and they will, don't be afraid to ask for a flashlight. And when someone else is in the dark, be the one who holds yours up.
Class of 2027, we built something here. Even when it fell over, we built it again. Go build the next thing. Lift as you climb.
Thank you.
What the writer told Toastful to get this speech
- Speaker
- Priya, valedictorian
- Class Memories
- The robotics team's robot caught fire at regionals sophomore year, and the whole school still calls it 'the toaster.' Every spring our class won the canned food drive by building a giant pyramid of soup cans in the lobby, and every spring it fell over. Senior year, the power went out during the winter concert, and the choir finished the song in the dark while everyone held up their phone flashlights.
- Challenges
- We started freshman year with half our classes online, so a lot of us didn't really meet until sophomore year. A flood closed the east wing for two months junior year, and we had chemistry in the library and gym class in the parking lot. We also lost a classmate, Danny Reyes, in a car accident junior year. His family asked that the class remember him as the kid who always held the door.
- Thank-yous
- Mr. Okonkwo, the chemistry teacher who held free study sessions every Thursday night for three years. Ms. Linh in the front office, who knew everyone's schedule better than they did. The bus drivers, the custodians and the cafeteria staff. And all the parents and grandparents who worked extra shifts so we could be here.
- Message
- Asking for help is not the same as failing. The people who did best here weren't the ones who never struggled. They were the ones who asked sooner.
- Personal
- I failed my first chemistry test freshman year, a 52. I hid it from my parents for a week and planned to quit honors science. Mr. Okonkwo found me after class and said, 'Come Thursday.' I went every Thursday for three years. I'm only up here because I finally raised my hand.
- Looking ahead
- About half of us are going to four-year colleges, others to community college, nursing programs, electrician apprenticeships, the Army and the Air Force, and some straight into jobs. I hope everyone keeps asking for help, keeps holding the door like Danny did, and finds people like the ones in this room.
- Extras
- Please keep the mention of Danny brief and gentle, one or two sentences. Our school motto is 'Lift as you climb.'